Mrs Butler' dog visits

Malo lelei bloggers,

Last tuesday we had an unexpected visitor come to Harris class. Jess (Mrs Butler’ dog) made our class so excited. Jess was a little anxious in our class . She was also wagging her white beautiful tail. Mrs Butler introduced Jess in our class telling us what she likes and what she doesn't like. She obeys all commands what Mrs Butler says she is also very obedient.

                                                                 

Treats are one of Jess’ favourite rewards. When Mrs Butler pulled out a packet of doggy treats her ears pricked up and she stood up walking a little bit forward but Mrs Butler said “Sit”,’ so Jess sat where she was.

The best part was when we got to pat her. Her head was so smooth and soft and her body was a little bit rough but it was fine. She is also very cute. After we did all of that we went out to play fetch with her only some of us got to play fetch because she has a problem with her leg so we stopped and had a little bit of chat about Jess and after that we had to say goodbye.

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